Semester B is about to end, a lot of us are struggling to keep us especially when most of us have been hit with covid. I realised that it was not only me who had lost their voice during this time while watching my classmates Beta videos. Despite the difficulties, they all managed to bring out the best versions of their videos.

I provided some feedback and possible suggestions to my classmates. While doing so, I had also learnt a lot of new terms and ideologies. I also learnt new layout ideas that I could make good use of for my own Digital Artefact.

Firstly, Liann had put efforts into creating her video but I wasn’t able to differentiate if I was looking at her Beta or Digital Artefact. she lacked the content that was suppose to be in Beta. Her DA is on future transportation in particularly, flying cars and self driving vehicles which as she mentioned is already in the process of making.

She and I both had similar issues with our Beta , we lacked referencing lecture content so I suggested her to do so in her DA. Referencing lecture notes is a great way to enhance both our knowledge and the credibility of our project.

Her video editing skill is definitely better than mine, I would learn that from her and present my DA with a good visual essay.

Next KB,

Kb did an excellent job with her Beta presentation, I loved it the most. her editing and voice over was soothing and easygoing. I learnt more about holographic VR through her beta since she had recapped her Digital artefact briefly.

I gave her two articles as references that she could use for her next episode, in different aspect. Including, work sectors and marketing use of holograms in the future.

I would follow her structure and layout in my next DA episode.

Last but not least Icy,

Icy’s Digital artefact is really similar to mine in view of the medical field.

I suggested her doing voice over in a faster phase since it was bit slow for me to understand. I was also confused about the actual product she was trying too bring out although her idea is excellent.

The medical field is a wide topic when it comes to futuristic technology, I suggested her to link her ideas to lecture references in her next episode. Overall, I loved her Beta and would be looking forward to her next episode.